landing-page-roast

TotalClaw 作者 totalclaw

审核登陆页面的清晰度、信任度、报价强度和转化阻力；返回优先修复和副本重写。

安装 / 下载方式

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totalclaw install totalclaw:totalclaw~xammarie-landing-page-roast

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curl -fsSL https://skills.taituai.com/api/skills/totalclaw%3Atotalclaw~xammarie-landing-page-roast/file -o xammarie-landing-page-roast.md

## 概述（中文）

审核登陆页面的清晰度、信任度、报价强度和转化阻力；返回优先修复和副本重写。

## 原文

# Landing Page Roast

Use this skill to diagnose why a page is not converting and produce concrete fixes.

## Inputs
- Page URL or pasted page copy
- Target audience
- Primary conversion action
- Price point / offer details

## Audit dimensions
1. **Clarity above the fold**
   - Is the outcome obvious in 5 seconds?
2. **Audience fit**
   - Is it clear who this is for (and not for)?
3. **Offer strength**
   - Is the promise specific, measurable, believable?
4. **Trust layer**
   - social proof, proof artifacts, risk reversal
5. **Friction**
   - too many fields, weak CTA hierarchy, distractions
6. **Objection handling**
   - price/time/risk doubts addressed?

## Output
- Overall score (0–10)
- Top 5 blockers (ranked by impact)
- Quick wins (<30 min changes)
- Structural rewrites (headline, subhead, CTA block)
- 3 CTA variants
- Optional A/B test matrix (what to test first)

## Rewrite standards
- Plain language
- Specific outcomes over buzzwords
- Fewer claims, more proof
- Keep tone consistent with target audience

## Example request
"Roast this AI automation service page for SMB owners and rewrite the hero + first CTA section to increase booked calls."